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"Small Talk"

Post by Neco-Ohno on Wed Mar 26, 2008 6:26 am

So far, the only person who's asked for critique is SpyrusTheVirus, no I'm going to give it a shot.



I've been tampering with a lot a new things lately. Basically, the purpose of this picture was to help me folds, position, outlines, and a new softer meathod of shading. I would like it if someone could tell me the flaws or what I could a have done to make it better. I would ask people on deviant art, but they're hardly ever honest.

However, the only thing that I know is wrong is the fact that her eyes lack shine, but that was done on purpose to make it cuter.
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Post by ManzanitaGrove on Mon Mar 31, 2008 2:16 am

I think shining black eyes are cuter than non-shiny black eyes..... xD
*shrugs*

^^; Its hard to critique!
Here goes:
Hmmm. The eye on the beetle (?) Seems a little out of place to me.
The new shading is an interesting combination of cell shading and brush stoke-style. I like it. Very Happy
The dark lines on her boots look they are meant to be creases or something, but looks like dark lines instead. xD
Beetle has great shading on the shell, but not enough shading on the beetle legs and beetle head.
Aaaaand maybe have some more hightlights. Like on her left sleeve it could use some.



No idea if I would actually like it better if you took my suggestions..... o-0
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Post by Neco-Ohno on Tue Apr 01, 2008 4:42 am

Thank you for the suggestions. I see what you meen with the beetle and her eyes. I'll make sure to keep that in mind next time!
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Post by ManzanitaGrove on Tue Apr 08, 2008 11:55 pm

Glad that I could help a bit. ^^
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Re: "Small Talk"

Post by Sinkain's Shadow on Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:09 pm

cute
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Post by Sinkain on Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:11 pm

is it me or are the eyes on the wrong ppl?
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Post by Sinkain's Shadow on Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:44 am

-_-;
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